tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38718953.post2553017179012302608..comments2024-01-09T19:21:12.646+11:00Comments on Sparkapolooza: jodeskahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05772556278458776868noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38718953.post-29151883618644358762011-01-18T12:16:30.436+11:002011-01-18T12:16:30.436+11:00Thank you both so much! I had to resist the urge t...Thank you both so much! I had to resist the urge to get all misty-eyed about your kind comments. I really appreciate the feedback, and also the specific detail that you go into, describing what appeals to you about the writing. This really helps me figure out what ideas do and don't work. Sometimes my writing doesn't live up to the thoughts in my head.Hilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06635628613744519816noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38718953.post-46512574676749319532011-01-17T00:54:36.927+11:002011-01-17T00:54:36.927+11:00This is beautiful. It is quite subtle and still qu...This is beautiful. It is quite subtle and still quite moving. The way words can capture the senses. Oh and the way you talk about smell! It is really powerful.<br /><br />I think you really were spot on with portraying Millers thoughts on being in that bathtub, whether or not she actually thought it at the time I'm not sure, but it is interesting the way we think in terms of photographs becoming memories or triggers for memories later on. I hope to read more!<br /><br />Your writing on photographs is so perfect, I find it very useful for my own research.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09505178078022849307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38718953.post-4895361311070151342011-01-16T22:42:25.734+11:002011-01-16T22:42:25.734+11:00This is amazing Hila!
I love the shifting perspe...This is amazing Hila! <br /><br />I love the shifting perspectives and the very 'textured' descriptions you've used throughout the excerpt. I think the way you've tied emotion to the experiences of the senses is really wonderful too.<br /><br />You say it's entirely experimental, but it feels very measured and very deliberate ... I would love to read more! :)Traceyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05011524586298838603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38718953.post-68266357444371518662011-01-14T19:18:07.535+11:002011-01-14T19:18:07.535+11:00oh thank you louise, that's so kind!oh thank you louise, that's so kind!Hilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06635628613744519816noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38718953.post-68798844122688145562011-01-14T15:13:45.746+11:002011-01-14T15:13:45.746+11:00Sounds fantastic, Hila. I'm looking forward to...Sounds fantastic, Hila. I'm looking forward to reading the whole piece. xoljlouisehttp://gracialouise.typepad.com/elsewhere/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38718953.post-74772992617045175692011-01-12T13:16:25.512+11:002011-01-12T13:16:25.512+11:00whoops, that should read "challenge", no...whoops, that should read "challenge", not "challagene". That's what happens when I type too quickly. <br /><br />Thanks for letting me submit Jo and Laura, this blog is such a great idea.Hilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06635628613744519816noreply@blogger.com